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06 May, 2014

Kelas Tips Menulis Traveling #14 : Apa Yang Tidak Boleh Ditulis di Artikel Traveling

Oleh Arini T

Jika minggu-minggu sebelumnya kita banyak membahas mengenai hal-hal yang perlu ditulis di artikel traveling, kali ini topik kita adalah apa yang TIDAK BOLEH ditulis di artikel traveling.

Apa saja sih yang tidak boleh ditulis dalam sebuah artikel traveling? Pada dasarnya sama seperti artikel lain, artikel traveling (baik travel feature maupun travel guide) harus terstruktur dan nyaman untuk dibaca. Gunakan bahasa sehari-hari yang mudah dipahami pembaca, namun juga tetap memperhatikan EYD dan kaidah bahasa Indonesia yang baik dan benar. Artikel traveling memang menyampaikan mengenai detail perjalanan atau tempat wisata atau obyek menarik di sebuah tempat, namun pilihlah detail yang menarik bagi pembaca, tidak perlu seluruh detail dituangkan dalam artikel.

Rule of thumb dari sebuah artikel traveling adalah jangan menuliskan aspek negatif dari obyek wisata. Contoh dari aspek negatif ini adalah pengalaman buruk yang Anda alami, misalnya makanan yang tidak enak, transportasi yang tidak nyaman, atau layanan petugas akomodasi yang buruk. Bisa jadi itu hanya moment-of-truth yang Anda alami, dan tidak dialami oleh wisatawan lain. 

Hindari juga menceritakan momen-momen yang sangat pribadi bagi Anda, misalnya saat Anda kehujanan, atau ketinggalan pesawat, karena belum tentu pembaca tertarik untuk membaca tentang hal tersebut. Perkecualian adalah jika momen tersebut terkait dengan kisah yang sedang Anda ulas dalam artikel traveling. Misalnya gara-gara ketinggalan pesawat, Anda jadi punya kesempatan melihat satu obyek menarik yang pantas untuk diceritakan.

Hindari pula membuat tulisan yang menyerempet masalah politik, militer, dan SARA. Anda mungkin ingin menuliskan perjalanan ke sebuah monumen militer (misalnya Monumen Kapal Selam di Surabaya) atau sebuah rumah ibadah. Anda bisa mengulasnya dari sisi lain, misalnya dari sisi sejarah, arsitektur, atau dari sisi pariwisatanya.

Hindari juga terlalu banyak menggunakan klise. Klise adalah ungkapan yang terlalu sering dipakai atau terlalu umum dan telah diketahui oleh semua orang, misalnya "matahari yang terbit dari timur". Klise akan membuat tulisan Anda menjadi membosankan, dan bisa jadi pembaca akan meninggalkan tulisan Anda.

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